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The Quest of Perfection

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[Verse 1]
Known by many as the quest of perfection,
Your body gets maimed,
And your feelings get changed.
And even after your body's pierced and your hair'is tied,
You still feel so unsatisfied.
And there's still something I'd like to mention.

[Chorus]
Although your hair is fake and your face is masked,
And your skin is burnt and your body's tasked,
I still love you,
Yes I do.

[Verse 2]
Known by many as the spell of deception,
The media tries,
To feed you their lies.
They think fat is bad and thin is right,
And eating is a young girl's blight.
And I still have something I'd like to mention.

[Chorus]

[Bridge/Break]
And you don't know just how beautiful you are,
You pierce and colour youself in hopes of making par,
But you still don't know,
That I'd march through all the hail and rain,
Just to stop you pain,
But you still don't know,
You just don't know.

[chorus]x2
add extra Yes I do at the end.
This one is a song :D written by me.

First song so don't be too harsh.

It's supposed to be about how girl's change their looks in the hopes of looking like the women on the media, but they don't realise just how beautiful they really are.

Can't believe I actually managed to make something that rhymes :jawdrop: it's unbelieveable

I don't know which catagorey it fits into so please bear with me if I got it wrong O.o
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